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Cold Winter Frost by ~xdeanx:iconxdeanx:



"Cold Winter Frost"

You were mine,
My only true treasure.
Our love was endless
Never needing to be measured

You ended it
Not knowing how much you lost
Leaving me standing frozen
In the cold winter frost

You can't comprehend how cold it felt
Having your icy hands leave mine forever
While I got the shiver from the pain just delt
and wanting to feel your lips again for the nice warm pleasure

Heres to all the lucky ones
Never having to feel this pain
Or even having to experience
The frost bitten vain.

Just pick yourself up young dreamer
For you will sleep another night away.
©2004-2009 ~xdeanx
:iconxdeanx:

Author's Comments

Don't really know where this came from, just had extra time after completing the STAR testing....

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:iconhopefulmirage:
Woah Brad. You seem sad. At least your poem does. Other than that, really great poem! Glad you decided to post more of them! Keep it up!!!

*~Emi-Chan~*

--
Love isn't finding the perfect person, it's seeing an imperfect person perfectly.
:iconxdeanx:
Actually, it was for a friend at school. Not for me :P.
:iconhopefulmirage:
well then say that!!! Dont get me freaked out!!! lol. Still. Doesn't change the fact that it's a great poem! :D
:iconhopefulmirage:
Dont thank me!! You're the one who wrote it silly!!

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